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Review:HappyMollyWeasley says:
Hi! It's HappyMollyWeasley here with your requested review!

I'm glad you asked me for a review, because I don't usually read this kind of stories, and I'd like to broaden my horizons a little. I love all the canon ships, so I'm both a little disturbed by the thought of Hermione with someone else, but also a bit curious. I also very seldom read anything from this genre, so this will be a nice change from my usual romance stories... :-)

At first I felt confused. Where is she, when is this? I still don't understand that fully, but I guess that it will become apparent later on? I like the idea of Hermione as a writer, and I also like that her magical skills are strong. You show her thoughtful and compassionate sides too, which is good. I picture that the term "Guardian" will be more explained in the later chapters?

As I normally read canon (or close to canon) stories I miss the well-knows surroundings and characters, as we so far only have met Hermione, and that makes it a little difficult for me to fully appreciate this first chapter. I guess that I would have liked it more if I read it as original fiction. Don't get me wrong here, I do like your style of writing, and this is a good chapter, but I found it a bit AU-ish.

Still, I was drawn into the story and I want to read the next chapter to find out more... I'll leave you another review there.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. The idea of the Guardian will be explained more with each chapter. I was worried that if I explained it completely in the first chapter it would take away some of the mystery of the story that I was going for.
Thank you for pointing out the areas in which you were confused on. I will be sure to make the area and the when more clear when I work on the edits this week.
This trilogy is meant to be quite Au-ish. The only probably cannon thing I was going to stick to was Hermione's characterization.
Thank you for all the insight I greatly appreciate all the comments.

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