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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
This was a very interesting beginning! I've never read the Bridgerton series so I really have no idea whats going on in this story but so far, I think its written absolutely wonderful! I'm excited to see how all the different characters come into play in this story and just how he feels that Gabriella is the one he is supposed to be with since she is so young but I guess only reading on will tell. I liked the characterizations in this story with Bill getting blamed for the spilled icecream as it seems the older kids are always getting blamed for something their younger sibling had done and even his angry reaction to getting blamed and wanting to run away. I think you did a great job with the beginning chapter to your story, it really is interesting and makes a reader what is going to happen and if Bill really is going to die by age thirty! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~
Recensio 2012

Author's Response: I'm glad that you're thinking the beginning is interesting! It's a bit of a different concept for me to try to write fanfiction for basically TWO series of books :)

Yes, the older child does get blamed often for the younger's actions :)

xChar


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