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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh how cute! I'm so happy little Oliver got his chance to prove to the guys that he could play quidditch and they won! I thought you did a great job with the chapter showing how much Quidditch means to Oliver even before he gets to Hogwarts. I only noticed one mistake and it was here: "Elliot there his arm around Oliver" I'm not sure if there is supposed to be threw or what but I thought I would point that out and then also this sentence: "That day for the first time the children of the north won a Quidditch game." was repeated twice and it broke up the flow of the story a little bit. But other than that i didn't spot any other errors and the flow was fine other than in that one part! I really liked the look into Olivers life and hope to keep reading this sometime again! Great Job!

Recensio 2012

Author's Response: Isn't he cute :P I loved writing this chapter. :)

It's okay thank you for pointing out the mistakes in this chapter. Thank you for your review :)

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