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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
ANNON ANNON HAI! Apologies in advance for a spazzy review, but I LOVE THIS STORY ALREADY :3

Aaah Lily is already so brilliant, she's quirky and funny and she's so the sort of person who'd you'd end up chasing dragons with a few hours after meeting her with no idea how you got there 8D But she's not annoyingly quirky, like too many stories are (remember Gina's blog about Avocado the quirky OC? She's NOT like that!)

Hehe I love how she was selling the Marauder's Map to get important money, and that's why she was expelled/everyone's angry. It's a PERFECT excuse, and I love how you've invented this Ministry law thing... I can so see them trying to lock up Lily if she does anything else wrong later on, too!

I love how you've already started characterising everyone, too. Like all of Lily's family are already forming in my mind, and they've already had their 'positions' made clear! Plus, I would totally love for Lily to turn up as one of these hated secretaries at some point :P Ahha I can totally see stilettos being thrown by her!

Just everything about Lily is awesome! But SHE DOESN'T LIKE TEA?! 8O No! I seriously hope that she gets into later on, otherwise I will potentially throw a hissy fit in the review box later on! I nearly spit out MY tea when she declared it :P

BUT YES I JUST LOVE IT ALL OKAY
and also THANKYOU FOR LETTING ME MARRY IT :3
~Lottie

Author's Response: Hey Lottie. You're quite cool.

~

NAH I LIED AGAIN! YOU'RE FREAKING AMAZING! ANd this review is amazing, and the fact you like this stupid little rambly story is also amazing.

And thus, I love you. Awesome.

I'm very glad she's not annoyingly quirky! I once used to sit down and actually think up funny quirks for my charcaters. One was 'can only wear blue socks or she has a spazzy fit'. Yeah. Then Gina's blog (THE blog!) made me see how stoopid I was at charcterisation.

I still sort of am actually.

OMG you've just given me a great idea to combine stiletto throwing with Lily getting locked up...ahha...

Wow Lottie m'dear- Matt Lewis and now Deep Breaths? Tut tut :P

Thanks for reviewing!

~ANNON xx

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