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Review:accioHPFF says:
MARINA!

*did not race across to read this*

I don't know where to start with this...

Draco. Your description of Draco at the door made me wonder if it was actually somebody else! :P I can imagine Scorpius like that, but Draco being like he was in this chapter wasn't something I expected. I really liked the way that you portrayed both Draco and Astoria though, because you made them different to what people expect. I think that they would cherish their only son so much as to the point of calling him 'Scorpy' (which was hilarious :P).

I want to know more about what happened at the shop whilst Rose was away though. Boris being cheerful, and Matthew being tired? I hope that you shed some more light on why they're both like that. Also, I obviously can't wait to see Rose's reaction to what happened.

... I think that's all that I can say that has any worth, apart from the fact that I loved this chapter! :D

Author's Response: Haha! I hate writing Draco, so I sort of wanted to make him as weird as possible. This story is definitely already over the top, so I didn't think having a strange Draco was too out of the question ;)

Thanks so much for the review, Scott!


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