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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Oh, wow! This was really moving. I think it was the part with Lily's rabbit, and how Ginny had once loved it too but now couldn't bear to look at it. Maybe it was how she'd turned to God, turned to God in her time of greatest need when everyone else had abandoned her. As a christian, I can relate to that scarily well.

I absolutely adore how you've written this. It' such a senitive topic, but I think you've manage dto get it right. I wasn't sure baout the part with Harry leaving her too but it seemed to fit and didn't disrupt the flow in my head.

It was originally for the radio 2 writing competition? That's interesting :) Good job, well done!

-Annon

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.
This was the first piece of writing I was actually proud of and it was my first HP fic.
Because it wasn't Originally a HPFF, I made Harry leave her and I know he would never do that but it was just to fit with the story.
Yeah, it was for the 500 words win your hieght it books thing. I only got to the top 2000 out of 74000, not the top 50 :( but I wasn't really expecting to.
Thanks again, this really made my day :)


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