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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey!

This was such a sweet story. I really liked your portrayal of Lucius and Narcissa. I think the way you described Narcissa's feelings about Lucius 'making the wrong choices' was beautiful. The emotions really stood out in the narrative and I could connect well with the scenes. The plot was great and it flowed smoothly. I also loved that part where Narcissa's heart "experienced it's first crack". I think that was a wonderful choice of words and imagery.

Over all, this was a superb read! Good work!

10/10

Cheers!
AD
~Recenseo~

Author's Response: Thanks so much :D

This fic took a long time to write because I wanted to get the words exactly right. I'm glad you liked it, and that you connected with Narcissa's emotions.

Thanks for such a lovely review :)


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