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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
I loved it, and I'm eager to read more. Their personality matches them completely. The way you described Peter being cowardly through his dialogue and with James and Sirius being their immature selves. Lupin also could use some better lying tactics. I honestly cracked up at them. And Snape. Poor guy. Anyway, this is really admirable and I want to read more.

Author's Response: Yay! I have written two other stories if you're interested (also focusing on the Marauders) and I'll probably write more throughout the year (though I'm in Year 12 so it's a struggle to find time :S) and I've got a longer story planned for the end of the year, so keep an eye out. :)
I'm glad you think so! :D I thought, since they're so young in this one, that it would be the perfect scene in which to show their personalities - their strengths and their flaws and also hint at what they'll become.
Haha, I thoroughly enjoyed writing Remus' lines in this - I really found myself having fun with his dry sense of humour. :P Yes, poor Snape!
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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