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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
For some reason I have been playing with the idea of writing a werewolf story in my head and since we both know that I generally cannot write darker things I would much rather read stories that can write darker things (or anything - like you).

This really didn't tell me much but that's the point of the first chapter. I'm ready to click the arrow to go on but I need to review (obviously!). It's interesting because no one writes about werewolves like this. They don't focus on an organization and write about the technical side to the process. It's more rabid, wild beast going out there and just being angry and wanting to bite people (arggh).

I like that you made the muggle woman not overly hysterical. She was upset but she wasn't annoying because sometimes in certain situations people can be over the top (and considering I write all my characters over the top it's refreshing to read about calm, level headed characters).

I just don't know if I trust the brother or the woman because they seem suspicious. Or maybe I'm just reading too into things!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! ♥

I know what you mean about how people usually write about werewolves - that's always been my impression, too, but you're much better read on this site than I am, so it's interesting to see my suspicions confirmed. I personally love the idea of looking at this sort of thing from every angle, and since the Ministry does have a division for dealing with werewolves... fun stuff. :P

I'm glad that you're wondering who's trustworthy - in this sort of story, I always love to keep people guessing. (Or, well, you know - in any story. The Lily/OC thing in the Albatross is making me really happy, too.)

Thank you for the review! As always, I really appreciate it! :) :)

- Branwen

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