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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey there!

I thought the story was really great, you have such a fantastic plot coming along and I can't wait to see what you'll make of it.

I like your OC, but I can't say much since there wasn't much information given. Though I can understand why, you can't actually reveal everything about a character in one go especially at the start of the story.

In any case, I thought you have a really great start for a story and I really like your OC, so I'll be back for more :D

CloakAuror9 xx
Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Hey Izzy! Thank you for this review it was so nice of you to offer! My plot is definitely something different for me, Im used to darker stuff or more romantic fics, however mystery is very new to me. I am beginning to let the plot take shape properly now with more twists and turns especially as chapter 5 is the most important chapter at the moment. Phoebe is the first OC Ive really got to know properly, like I can think about what happened when she was little, her relationship with her family and her actual parents. Ive gone so far its even made me consider a sequel but I think thats just a thought at the moment.

I hope youll come back to read, it is great to know I have readers for a story I really enjoy writing.

Thanks again,
Bex :)

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