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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Alex is awesome, I really like the way he isn't so oblivious to things and he's very acceptable of the fact that James is in fact his dad, like had seen it coming. though I don't think he completely trusts James, maybe its got to do with the fact that he grew up with only his mum for seven years. In any case, he is doing a great job of acting so mature about the problem.

I can't wait for the next chapter! Things are beginning to heat up, and I just really really want all of this figured out. Why did Jo leave? Why does James hate her so much? Why did James ignore all those letters? So many questions to be answered! I hope the next chapter will answer some of them because I have a feeling it would be rather long. :D ♥

Awesome writing, by the way! This chapter made my day :D

Ta,
CloakAuror9 xx
Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: He did kind of see it coming. After all, Al was introduced to him as his uncle and his mom only has one brother. He put the pieces together from that. It wasn't exactly child's play but he got his Sherlock on. lol.

The relationship between James and Alex is rather interesting. At this point I think Alex knows that because of the tensions between his parents, he is in the perfect position to be hurt and used by one to hurt the other (even if they don't realize that's what their doing).


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