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Review:WeasleyTwins says:
Hi, WeasleyTwins here to review - don't you just love review swaps!

First off, I want to say that I adore your summary! I am really drawn to excellent, intriguing, attention-grabbing summaries! Summaries really are the way that writers first capture their readers.

Okay, I'm going to go all fangirl on you here for a moment. OH MY HOLY WATERMELONS! I just love little Bill! He is so cute and adorable and cute! Your characterization of him is brilliant - it's canon, it's quirky, it's different, but not bizarre. I also really enjoyed how, instead of jumping into the story that one would expect from your summary, you give us this chapter. It's lighthearted, but it's mysterious and intriguing. I like how this is something that Bill remembers from his childhood. His views of Charlie and Molly are also incredibly adorable. You do a fantastic job as writer by combining description and dialogue. There is a nice mixture and it flows quite well. There's something relaxing about your style of writing. You don't bombard the readers with purple prose or stilted dialogue.

I'm sorry that was just one long ramble - I'm usually much more organized! Anyway, this was an excellent read and I will certainly be back! :)

Shelby

Author's Response: I'm so happy you like my summary! That's always the hardest part for me to think up and so for you to say that it actually pulled you in...*smiles*

Yay! Bill is loved! I loved writing him because he's so cute as a little guy (and more than a little cute when he grows up *eyebrow waggle*). I'm glad that there was a good mixture between the two as that is what I was going for! I have a tendency to neglect dialogue. :/

Thank you for this!

xChar


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