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Review:Cavell says:
You left such a nice review on my story that I decided to leave (a hopefully equally nice) one on yours!

I like the start of it. It is just the tiniest bit filler-y, but it's nice to see what all the characters are like before the whole plot and story starts, so I'm not complaining. It's a really good start, and I love how much more of a girl Hugo is than Tia - and I love her nickname, too! I saw the request for the title over at the forums, and I have to say, the one you chose is really fitting, not to mention very clever.

I only spotted just one mistake in this, and it's not even much of a mistake - "No, she's in the year [about]," he mutters. Where it says 'about', don't you mean 'above'? That's pretty much the only thing I spotted, otherwise your spelling and grammar is really good.

I can't wait to see what direction this story is going in, I have a feeling it's going to be really interesting, definitely going into my favourites!

-Linn

Author's Response: Yeah, it is quite fillery but I thought it would be a good start to introduce the characters etc - thank you! Hugo's just a little girl at heart and I'm glad you like the title, it took a bit of googling what it actually means but I'll admit I was quite proud of myself aha

Oh, thanks for pointing that out! I've gone back and changed it now so thank you for that!

Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it! (and, it was a really lovely review :P)



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