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Review:potterfan310 says:
aww this story is brilliantly written :)
you have captured fleur really well and i was totally shocked when i read that cedric was his father. I love how they are reunited at the end, so sweet.

I know she would be like 13/14 (i think?) but it would have been nice to know how her sister gabrielle had reacted to finding out fleur was pregnant and about her choosing adoption. it would also have been nice if we saw Bill's reaction to finding out that his wife has a son. would fleur have told him about the past? or would it have been a total shock?
A brilliant heart warming story and very well written

Author's Response: Awh, thanks!

Cedric, I thought, wasn't a cliche, overdone choice, and I believe it was probable (:

I almost included a scene with Gabrielle, but then I cut it /:

Bill's reactions are left to the reader's imagination. (:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, that makes me smile! :)

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