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Review:bester_jester says:
Great story. I love the idea of a quiddich strategist.

Not sure if it's because like you said, you don't normally write male POV, but is James unhappy? Just sort of comes across as mad at everyone.

Interested to find out what Ruby means to him!

Author's Response: James is definitely unhappy lol and it's not because of my inability to write male-centred stories. I'll explain later on that he's hit a low point in his life, and that he's become really grumpy and grouchy and just easily tested since finishing Hogwarts. So yeah, he's mad at everyone. And lol I should probably get to that at some point - maybe in the next chapter, when they interact a bit more. I don't want to just throw her into the story, and I'd like their communication to develop from scarce to whatever it could become ;)

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