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Review:maskedmuggle says:
I really liked this! I have never read a Bertie Bott story before, so this was very interesting and very refreshing and new! I really liked the whole plot - especially with Bertie and Myrtle - such an unusual pair, but one that you made work really well. I loved the introduction you gave of Bertie - of all the questions he asked and how they were actually time-wasters, it just really conveyed how different a character Bertie was.

I also really liked the progression to Honeydukes and the speech Bertie makes to Myrtle before she agrees to become partners :) I really loved how unique this was, great characters and a well-written story :)

Author's Response: Thank you once again! This actually started out as a story about Myrtle, and once I discovered that Bertie lived around the same time period, I couldn't help but throw him in there. From there on they shared the spotlight. As for the introduction, that was a commentary I'd been dying to pair with a character for some time, and Bertie turned out to be a great match. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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