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Review:inkbutterfly says:
Aw, Sirius! He is so sweet. I can't wait to see his response to the letter from L.C. There were some really good moments in there, like when Sirius was holding her hand, and the bit with the scar and him touching her face, I LOVED IT!
The James and Lily was cute, in a funny way, and of course they got each others initials ;)
Poor Marlene, what did they do to her? Did they rape her or something? *threatening glare* They better be nice to Marlene because I love her.
Seriously, she is almost as good as Sirius! Almost...
AND speaking of the sex god, as much as I can't wait until he finds out who L.C. is, I am a bit doubtful of how interesting the story will be after that, so you better have some dammed good (and dramatic) things planned for then!
But anyway, this chapter was good. I didnt really get what you meant by her being blind at the start? It kind of made sence, but not really. The bit about Teddy naked was damn funny, and Lennys random comments through the whole thing always crack me up.
Looking forward to the next chapter, good luck!

-Kerryn xx

Author's Response: The next letter will be one to remember. You'll love it :D. Of COURSE James and Lily got each other. They are destined, after all :).
Marlene? Well, you'll figure that out soon. Stupid Regulus and Lestrange. We should kill them. Maybe we will... ;D.
I have so much drama and so many interesting things planned for when he finds out. I'm not guaranteeing that he finds out so soon.
The blind part. She had her eyes closed? I know its a little far.plus, the white walls. That practically blinds you. I know its done it to me its fair share of times.


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