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Review:FriendofMolly says:
Jet and LadyM,
Exactly right. I have read stories that had the Weasleys grieving alone at the Burrow, trying bravely to carry on. Then there's the ones where there is little to no grief expressed. You have a wonderful mix that mimics the real life I have observed. I was surprised at the restraint Harry showed when the Bug showed up. I do love what you have written. I think Ginny is finally letting it sink in that Harry loves her and only her. Once she accepts what really is, that is when the bonding can ramp up. Now I must continue.
FoM

Author's Response: YOUR BACK!! I'm thrilled!

LadymBlack has been a wonderful beta. Not only is she fantastic at the technical aspects, fact checking and working on the spelling, but she has written some great dialogue. When she objects to a story thread or something it is always much better when I've re-written it.

All the letters from the other witches wanting Harry are really doing a number on Ginny. If we remember her and Cho in DH she is somewhat jealous anyway.

I don't think Harry loses his temper very often. I think as he has gotten older he is more and more in control, and that he will probably continue to be given more to understatement and trying to accomplish things without theatrics. I't always succeed, but he's not by nature a showman.

Ginny, well ...

Jet


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