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Review:FriendofMolly says:
Jet and Ladym,
Unfortunately Harry doesn't have a clue that he needs to reassure Ginny that she is his heart. Perhaps if he does, she will tone down her wardrobe. Arthur (you) found the best place for the couple to be. They'll be together, yet will need to act accordingly to the situation. I think it will give them a perfect time to bond (I believe that's what Kreacher was suggesting). I look forward to the next chapter. This just gets better and better.
FoM

Author's Response: The sleeping situation is an Author's choice. One of the things I talked to Mrs_Granger about when we were talking about her story, and then a little when she did some beta work on mine, was Author's choices. Most people don't seem to be interested in the more technical aspects of writing, how and why you make choices.

Of course sleeping together but not 'sleeping together' is awkward. It doesn't help that Ginny has found her mother's Touch-of-Lust spell. The 16 year old hormones are almost out of control anyway. Another Author's choice.

Harry is just too busy. I've read too many stories where suddenly everything is perfect. I don't think it's that easy.

Jet


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