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Review:Miss Muggle says:
You most certainly did pull this of! Quite beautifully, in fact. I could just feel for Fleur, it was obviously a very difficult decision for her. I like how you portrayed her as a pregnant teen, without making her seem like a, shall we say, scarlet woman. That is very well done.

Also, it is an interesting idea to make Cedric the father. I've never read a Fleur/Cedric and I think it is a good way to avoid the whole telling-the-father situation.

If I have one imperfection to point out, it would be the French accents. They were mostly difficult to understand. Also, when Fleur talks to her mother and people, she would be speaking in French, although of course that would be too much. The accents should be a bit clearer, though.

I love how he reunites with her at the end. I do want to know how Bill reacts! No matter what, I picture this story having a nice happy ending with Fleur reuniting with her long lost son. It's a lovely story.

Author's Response: Awh, this review made me smile soo much! I really wanted readers to connect to her, and feel what she was going through. She's (like you said) not a scarlet woman, just a teenager who got herself in to a rather adult situation and had to make a very tough, adult decision.

I'd never read a Fleur/Cedric either! but, I thought it probable (:

I apologize for the accents :/ I went a little over the top, I was trying to give them the accents, but I think it was rather over done, too :p

I wanted it to have a full circle ending, where she sees him again, I thought it rather touching :')

I'm leaving Bill's reaction to the imagination of the reader. :)

I'm soo glad you enjoyed, that makes me smile. :)


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