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Review:TooMuchMagic says:
I think I'm in love with this story. You won't believe how pleased I am to have stumbled upon something so good! Since the starting, your writing's been wonderful and you used lovely word choices throughout. I feel that your characterisation is good as well, and your plot is layered and well thought out. And um I hate Sybil, she's just scum on my screen :| Okay phew glad to get that out of the way!

I really like where you're going with this story, and that you're taking your time with the pacing. Take all the time that you need! I feel that you could write a hundred chapters of this and I would still enjoy it *feels sheepish*

I can't remember everything that I meant to comment on because I just read the whole thing in one go... I do remember you mentioning that you weren't sure how to go about with Hermione's grief at losing Ron though, and I thought you did it with realism. The whole story is believable in my books. :) I'm so stoked to read the rest! You've written something great, and I'm going to give you a 10/10 for it. x

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for this. It does my heart good to see that you're liking the progress of this story. As you can see in my author's notes, I've struggled over the pacing and such and have been tempted to just "cut to the chase". It's feedback like yours that reminds me of why I'm taking the route I'm going!

Sybil is scum. Unfortunately there's only a special type of product that will get her off our screens for good...

Thank you so much for this! And by the by, I think you were the lucky 300th review!


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