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Review:Aether says:
This one-shot is beautifully written! I love the imagery and I could almost hear the "thud-thudding." I didn't completely understand the context of it though (why was Lily bleeding? Didn't she die of Avada Kedavara?). You really captured Snape well in your descriptions. I haven't read many Snape/Lily fanfictions, but this one is definitely the best written one I have ever read. :)


Author's Response: She did die of Avada Kedavra - this was written as a metaphor. He's not literally holding her heart, only metaphorically. The idea is that he only damages their relationship and also her life by being involved with her. Thanks so much for the review, I'm glad you thought it was well-written :D

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