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Review:hausofluucy says:
Hello! Thank you for entering my challenge! :)

Firsty, this was great! I loved the idea that she'd been to the room as a student at Hogwarts, it made it seem so much more special to the reader!

I thought it was a great touch how you added she was afraid of what the mirror would show her! I also liked how what she saw changed in the time that passed. :3

My favourite part was when Bellatrix faded away and she moved closer to Andy, I thought that was very sweet. :') I also loved the last line, "She needed to do something which was long overdue." because I always wanted something like that to happen like a reconcilation after the Battle of Hogwarts so it made me happy. :3

I can't seem to find any serious grammar mistakes or spelling and your paragraphing is great! :3

My only CC is that is was a little short! I'd have loved it to have been longer because it was a great piece of writing, well done!

Thanks for entering my challenge! The reviews from the other challenge will be up shortly too (sorry again for the long wait) and the results for the challenge will be up soon too. :) Lucy :) x

Author's Response: Hey there.

Your challenges are the ones which I find difficult, though I love entering them. I always seem to have a theme/genre/character that I wouldn't usually write, so I'm honestly so happy that you enjoyed it. I wasn't sure whether it was too OOC, so the fact you haven't said so has made me extremely happy!

I had so many possibilities of things to write for her. I always had it planned that she would visit the mirror three times, but I couldn't decide what it was that she would see. I'm glad that you liked the choice of what she saw.

I'm sorry that it was short! But I shall remember and try to make any future writings a little longer.

Thank you for this review and I cannot wait for the other reviews and more importantly for the results! Great challenge! =]


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