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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
My father is constantly telling me I have the social graces of a drunk walrus

^ OH. What a wonderful way to introduce yourself, Mr Lupin.

Since I seem to be able to finally count the music in sets of three without needing to mouth the integers, I'm more than ready to hear your answers now

^ He has this best lines in this chapter.

I can't think of anything much more wonderful than eating all the pumpkin pasties you could ever want and then being able to simply tighten a few stays to completely mask the aftereffects with only the tiniest discomfort of not being able to draw a full breath

^ I wish that was in style as well. Oh lord. This...I couldn't stop laughing at this! You're doing wonderful work. Remus was a breath of fresh air. So much fun.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so relieved that the lines you thought were most funny were ones I completely thought up myself instead of borrowing and adapting from the original novel. Remus definitely proved that he had horrible social graces simply by the way he publicly admitted it. :) I'm really glad Remus seems to be going over well. I wasn't sure if I was relying on the base of Henry Tilney too much. But I wanted to emphasize his kind of spastic humor in this chapter to offset his changed mood and dialogue later in the story. Thanks a million for reviewing each chapter! It was very cool, also, getting reviews from someone I've seen around the site a ton, but don't "know" (or put in a formal request to) :) Thanks again! ~Renny

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