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Review:ladybella says:
Hey!
I'll admit what made want to read this is because the oc had quite and Irish sounding name. :P

This story was very well written and very easy to read, so well done.

I like how as a reader you grow to care for an oc who has no contact with any canon characters so well done for that too!

It was very interesting to see the memories of someone you dont know and care about what's going on and Rory seems to have a very interesting back story.

I like how calm he is while fighting in a war, its almost like he knows things probably wont end rosy but he's ready and accepts it without question or something. I dont know. hes very likeable!

And I loved the blue tack bit. :P

Well done!

Ladybella.

Author's Response: Hi.
This was my first attempt at writing a story from an OC pov, and when I was given the details of this charactor to do for the challenge, this just popped into my head.
When Rory was thinking about his memories I just thought that it would be apt to have him think back over his life.
The person who issued this challenge that this story came from has sent me the details of all the other characters that were never used in the challenge. So look out for a few more stories.
He was calm because he was thinking of his father who (though he had arguments with) he loved and respected. He thought he'd never see him again. So I thought I'd have him come to stand side by side with his son in the final battle.
Thanks for the read and review. So glad you enjoyed it.


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