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Review:Moonyxluna says:
OH my god.. The chapter summary and I just know I'm going to be reading this through my fingers.

oh my god. oh no. no, you can't do this. nope.. I can't read it.. SHE CAN'T GO!

You just see these little changes happening in the way you write his mannerisms. I still like that you retained the fact that he knows what he did and what his family did, but in the way he softens up and asks, "you'll be with me..?" was very sweet. Plus Gibby was a doll, bless her heart I wanted to just squeeze her into a hug and make her stop crying.

It was such a powerful line, her next one- "until the end."- it sort of reminded me of Lily with Harry in the forest and it just put such a meaningful moment into perspective.

okay.. hands going over the eyes again.. DRACO! He's losing his mum and.. ah! When he looked up to Amelia to ask 'why?'-- It's such a 'losing his mum' moment and it brought out the innocent child in him in such a powerful way. I just want to make everything better for him! I'm not going to cry. nope. I swear. I'm not going to. Through the whole little talk with Draco I liked how you had her keep a professional tone.

I'm not going to cry. I'm not going to cry. *peeks through covered fingers to read Draco's last words*

Seriously, are you trying to make me cry!? I hate crying! This was so emotional, and so real, and so beautifully written. Very amazing chapter. not enough words for this. Loved it. Keep it up dear, I have to know what happens next!

Author's Response: I am so glad that you liked this chapter!! I was worried about how it would be recieved.

Ah, see I am glad that you pointed out the subtle changes with his mannerisms. I am glad that you are picking up on those because it is something that I really hoped someone would. =) I loved being able to portray a different side of him as this chapter went on. He has that innocence about him because I don't think he ever really did when he was a kid so he is making up for it.

Gibby was that high anxious comic relief when she does what she does to Draco. She is such a part of the family that I needed to include her in every way that I could mention her. I wanted to show the changes with her being there because she is just as much family as anyone else.

I am glad that you liked Amelia's line. "Until the end" because I wanted her to show how dedicated she was with her job and how much she felt for Draco at the same time. Her professional manner will always come through because that is just who she is.

I hope I didn't make you cry! Thank you for all the wonderful compliments and thank you again for reading and reviewing. I always love to know what you think. I can't stop grinning now. =D

-SR17

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