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Review:CambAngst says:
I'm going back catching up on a lot of stories that I read and reviewed a long time ago and I found this one among my old reviews. After reading this chapter, it dawned on me that What Means Most is probably a sequel to this story. Very interesting...

Sirius's recollection of his escape from Hogwarts seemed exactly in line with what I remembered. It must have been an amazing feeling, flying away on Buckbeak's back, and you captured it fairly well.

I thought perhaps you could have elaborated just a bit more on how he arrived at his choice of destination. Does he have some history with this island, or was it just a place he spotted from the air?

Cora seems like a real pistol. Most witches wouldn't just walk up to a mysterious, sleeping wizard and yank the blanket right out from under him. If there was anything that felt a bit off about her character, it was that. Especially considering that her family fled England specifically to get away from the magical world. Obviously, she's intrigued as to what happened while they've been away and she sees Sirius as a chance to re-engage.

I'm looking forward to reading about their night out dancing.

Author's Response: yeah I had that scene with the blanket more for a shock factor and a way that she'd meet him... I didn't really have a better idea how to pull that off. I agree that maybe I could elaborate how he came up with the idea of the mediteranean island. Maybe a poster of a travel agency in a town he was in as a dog? snagged a map and took off? hmm. I'm so glad you and all my other reviewers are so into this story and helping me fill plot holes :D
Thanks so much for reviewing! And yes, What Means Most is connected to it :D


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