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Review:water_lily43175 says:
'In between "fine" and "Harry Potter", there is a whole world of still not bloody fine.'

This line tickled me. Your characters have been blessed with far too much wit.

So, Dimitri has replaced Cal as my favourite character. In fact, he's well in the lead right now!

Perkins creeps me out.

Why has Cal not done anything about seeing Nat yet? Can he not go to visit her? He doesn't even seem to have tried!

Aaahh, that must have been horrible for Tanith! I see both her point of view AND Jennifer's, to be honest... Intrigued to see what Jennifer does next, surely she won't just let Wilson be Kissed?

Author's Response: Everyone either loves Dimitri or thinks he's evil or both. Can't imagine why...

I think I probably cut a line scene somewhere (we're in the section I NaNo'd, I suspect now I may have not done the world's best editing job) which included the Nat thing. It did boil down to 'Thanatos said no and Cal didn't want to piss him off', but it's an oversight that I didn't move it. I may have imagined the scene but I think it was a conversation with Tanith which otherwise went nowhere and I must have thrown the baby out with the bathwater. I wrote a lot of crap for NaNo. I shall have to re-add that detail!

And yes, thus begins the sequence of Tanith's Impossible Choices.


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