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Review:water_lily43175 says:
ARIANE AND MELANIE YES. Only they could tell Tanith to brighten up, darling in these circumstances!

In a way, the likes of these two are the most dangerous people in these times. I mean, the people who would have you locked up in Azkaban for even daring to utter a bad word against them are OBVIOUSLY to be avoided at all costs. But they wouldn't be able to do it without the likes of Ariane and Melanie just sitting back and letting them do whatever without a care in the world so long as it doesn't affect them personally. Ugh. So self-absorbed I actually hate them for it. Even if I do see WHY they're that way.

"Tanith just had to think of little baby Leanne" ... isn't she called Leah?

I forgot for a moment, when Tanith was wondering how Robb knew about her and Tobias, that she never got told that Cal was in contact with his dad. I'm guessing that's where the info came from?

Whoa, don't go calling Tanith a fascist, Wilson! What an idiot...

Author's Response: *coughs and waves hand* There is no name error in this chapter! Everything is fine, citizen!

And yeah, Ariane and Melanie are exactly the kind of people who allow this kind of evil to flourish in the world. Bad things happen, and they happen to other people, and you can't DO anything about it, so why fuss, right? Theirs is a very human kind of weakness and self-absorption, and they have no reason whatsoever to change their ways.

Though I still love them.

And yeah, Cal - writing to his father about everything normal under the sun in some forlorn hope he could make a connection with him - would have mentioned T/T - and Robb's no idiot. Tanith rescued Tobias, that's a matter of MLE record, and he's enough of a canny manipulator that this alone would have him try to test the waters. If Tanith was confused, nothing lost. But it worked, so now he has a weapon in his pocket. There need to be means to keep these potentially problematic employees in check, after all, and subtlety works better than brutality!

Nick Wilson: Not That Bright.

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