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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
Yay for finally reading this story (and I will continue the Unsinkable Molly Prewett too. I haven't forgotten about that story.) And I love this already! You started in the middle of the action and pulled me in and from there it was just straight flow to the end of the chapter.

Just a nitpicky little thing before I forget if you don't mind: You have three quotation marks in the quote in your story summary. Not one or two pairs. This confused me a little.

I don't really have any other CC than that, so I'll just continue with the praise. :) Firstly... so cool! I mean, bounty hunter! And I like the way you characterise Rose. She's cool, but she still seems normal in many ways and you don't make her swear all the time or throw "witty" remarks about or be rude to everyone or something like that. I'm sure you know what I mean. Like authors sometimes try to overdo the difference between her and Hermione or any nice girl. But like I said, your Rose is not that girl. I like her. :)

And Scorpius. Not that we really saw much of him yet, but first I was thinking "awww he's a painter" and then I fell for him when he smelled like "sunshine and paint". That might just be two important things of the way amortentia would smell to me.

Did I say I love all the little details? That's a big thing of what makes Rowling's writing so captivating too. I mean, little things like Angelo's psychological healer and him reading an auror novel and the quirky names and things. It gives so much to a story. Oh and I loved how you wrote adult Ron. He's so funny and so believable at the same time. And Angelo too. I can't help liking him in some way. I'm sure he likes Rose too really with their light banter. I laughed out loud at "I hate you and want you to die.".

So, great story and I promise, even though I have to go now, I will be back. I promise. :) Because I want to know what happens, and I think Butrus will turn out a bit more difficult than expected, or she will cross paths with some of his more dangerous friends.

Author's Response: I swear I remember it having the correct amount of quotation marks. I feel like I've checked it before cause it looked wrong, but I was *right* at the edge of the maximum characters for the summary. I should stop being lazy and look at it again.

I know just what you mean about Rose's characterization. The Sassy Sue version of her is so prevalent that it's hard to find another sometimes. I don't see her that way so I went off on my own tangent. She's lazy, and childish, and strangely innocent while also quite worldly and witty, and it's a lot of fun to write her that way.

Scorpius is the same - I have a much different view of him in these stories than his usual archive portrayal. Sunshine and paint ;)

I adore throwing in details, particularly when I can add extra magic or obscure canon stuff (like pogrebins and Bundimuns). It's such fun to me. I really enjoy writing Angelo, he's a big jerk and keeps Rose on mostly cause her uncle is Harry Potter haha. And he probably secretly thinks she's funny.

I hope you come back and read some more! I'm really glad you liked the opening chapter :D Thank you so much for reviewing!


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