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Review:water_lily43175 says:
I ACTUALLY really love Dimitri. Especially the way he speaks English. So adorable. And I feel so sorry for Aurora, regardless of whether or not she wants people to... But it's like, since she's been denied the love of her life, all she has is work. It makes me think of Tanith...

I thought Clint was dodgy. Trying to work out who A.R is, I'm not having much success so far!

I cannot BELIEVE Tanith would even consider cancelling coffee times with Ariane and Melanie! That girl doesn't know when she's got it good...

I like Jennifer Riley. I really do. Plus, being a law student, I thoroughly enjoyed that chat she had with Tanith about the whole human rights and trials thing. Except it's now made me think of my revision again. DAMN YOU.

Author's Response: Dimitri's a sweetie. His diction's kind of tough to break out of; everyone suddenly starts speaking like him in a scene if I'm not careful! Aurora's life's been crappy, but she's sort of let it be - it's been almost twenty years, and she didn't move on. There's an element of bad luck in there, but there's also an element of choosing to NOT buck up her life. But she is an intentional reflection on Tanith, and especially was in Shade with the comparisons being drawn between her and Tobias' parents, and Toby, Annie, and Tanith. I'm SUBTLE.

Don't worry. There'll be Ariane and Melanie soon. But I'm glad you like Jen Riley, she really does become the runaway star of this story (in that, even I didn't anticipate all she'd do). She makes a great foil for Tanith, too, since they're both forceful personalities but in difficult ways and clash so entertainingly.

Oop. This story might not be the best one to help you not think about revision if you're a law student. I'm a sufficient Politics Nerd & Enthusiast for it to all creep into my writing...!

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