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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
I was going to review this last night, but I forgot then I lost the story link. So I'm glad you requested! :P

Anyway, I thought the story was really good! I really like the way you incorporated Hunger Games and the Marauders together. It seems all very fitting and very believable. Your descriptions are really well done, I can just so imagine Lily and James fighting around the arena, throwing hexes and spells at other participants. (For some reason, I am imagining Lily with a bow and arrow and she's shooting squirrels with them...)

Though, I must admit I actually thought that Lily and James would enter the Arena as arch enemies and only get together at the end. So I was surprised when they started hugging and kissing each.

So, there's already one or two plot twists on the first chapter...I can't wait to see the others. They seem like they are going to be great, considering that you started out to the story SO well.

Please, please let me know when the second chapter is up, I would really love to read the rest of this fantastic story! ♥

Ta,
CloakAuror9 xx
Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Hey!
Thank you! Hmm, Lily as Katniss haha (now that's a funny thought - i'm imaging her falling over a lot. Weird) MOVING ON!

That would have worked wouldn't it? Yeah I think I wanted it to be less-cliche'd than most of my stories. I think I'm going to have flashbacks to the days when they did hate one another (or when Lily hated James).

Thank you!! If I ever the second paragraph I'll be sure to let you know!

Jas, x


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