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Review:iLuna17 says:
First off, I have to say: I love Neil. He's the perfect history teacher; I hope you have more of him. I love the Salem Witch incorporation with the Statue, and how 'book smarts' wasn't everything to him. I really want to see more of him/the class.

As for our four slippery friends ... I really like Louis. Nathan I'm not to sure about, but Louis seems like the best one. Nice, intelligent, and the 'just do it' line at the end seems to say exactly what the Slytherins did in LEBS.

I'm also wondering to see what will happen with Quidditch. I don't think all four will make the team, but I'm wondering if any of them will.

Overall, very interesting chapter. I'm still gushing over Neal, because I really want him as my history teacher now. :)

Keep it up!
Ellie

Author's Response: Thank you :)

I really enjoyed writing that classroom scene - rather built on what my ideal of an "outstanding lesson" (to quote the UK Schools Inspectors) should look and feel like - going beyond the textbook and challenging a deeper understanding.

I'm pretty sure Louis hasn't been written much like this before - but hey, I'm happy with how he's turning out. As for Albus and the others, well, lots more growing up to do...

Thanks again

Sheriff


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