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Review:Renfair says:
Yay! My fan fiction "obligations" with deadlines are done, so now I can get back to reading! I can't believe this story has so few reviews. Yeah, I know it's harder to keep up an audience with a sequel, but the first part was SO GOOD! I can't wait to see where you're going to go with this now that we're really way off on an AU tangent.

I imagine pumpkin juice would actually be really nasty. I don't blame Lily for not wanting to drink it, but then still doing it because she's so thirsty. But I just feel like it would taste like the way a raw pumpkin smells. At least hot pumpkin in pie is good, but the drink is cold...so it's just GROSS sounding!

The little paragraph about Harry never knowing his father except as an illustrated story through photographs is just so sad. If I wasn't so tired, I bet it would have made me cry. Blame it on having a toddler separated from his own dad at the moment, even though our situation is temporary.

"She was a faithless wretch to feel this way for anyone with her husband barely three months in the grave." No, you're not. Severus is hot. Just give into it, already! I mean, three months is PLENTY of time to get over the death of your husband and father of your son who you knew since you were 11!

This was a very nice prologue, setting up several interesting branches of plot with surprisingly few words. I think it's really nice that Severus doesn't believe Myra is dead. I don't think he's in denial, just that he probably felt so close to her that he's kind of just know if she was *really* dead. Or at least, he feels like he should know. I wonder if she's kind of tied directly to Voldemort now where if Severus tries to bring back his old teacher, he'll inadvertently bring back Voldemort as well.

Lovely lovely chapter! It's kind of disappointing that there are only 6 up so far when I was spoiled being able to read "Unwritten" all the way through. I guess we both just need to get writing! Go go go!

Author's Response: Yikes! I'm sorry it took so long to respond, Renny. My phone won't let me and if I actually get to sit down at the keyboard it is an exceptional day ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed the opener -- it's always my worry that the 'catch-up' portion will bore readers who just finished the previous volume. Ah ha ha, I loved your speculations on where the plot may go... I maintain silence on whether your speculations are in line with my plans :D


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