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Review:Miss Muggle says:
Whoa. This completely draws me in. I just want to find out more. The letter! What is it? Who is the young woman? And, of course, what happened before?

You really do an incredible job of showing, not telling. With Louis' sisters, his actions, and his feelings, and the fact that something big happened. Especially since it is written in second person. Instead of saying "this is what you do and how you feel" you paint a picture.

Author's Response: Haha, I'm so glad it draws you in! Good questions, as well, very good questions... I can't tell you anything, though ;)

Thank you so much! I only recently realised that there was a showing vs telling thing (I always just described everything on principle), tbh, but thank you very much!

Thanks so much for this review - it was really very lovely!
Aph xx

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