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Review:GirlOnTheSidelines says:
Eee! I did a little dance when I saw this had a new chapter! I love your writing style, it is so much more detailed than mine (something I am working on so DoF is under major editing at the moment). I love how much she wants him and how he is trying to resist her. It is really interesting how we are seeing this through the point of view of someone who doesn't know about magic (that thing with the remote was hysterical) and you really do that well. I cannot wait to see her reaction when she finds out! As always - update soon! Because I love your stories, they are a welcome break from revision.
Another Paradox chapter has been validated which I'm a bit worried about so please give me your honest opinion, also I have a new Prologue for DoF if you want something else to read. Not sure what's going up next, I'm having a bit of writers block at the moment but I will try and post something soon,

GirlOnTheSidelines.

Author's Response: Hello!

How are you and all that jazz? Its good to hear from you again because I've been a bit unsure about this chapter, I didn't think that I did that good of a job on it. But phew!
You think so, huh? I think I put in too much detail...and I make so many mistakes that its ridiculous, I admire your simpler way of explaining a scene that doesn't go on for five pages like mine, hahaha. Oh, Audrey made no effort to hide her desire and I think Percy finds that both arousing and horrifying, but he's trying hard to resist her! It was so fun to write as well, he was very uncomfortable and it was hilarious for me, cause I was like, "Mwhahaha, give in, Perce! Give in!"
I thought that I would put this in both of their POVs but then I thought, "It'd be nice to see a Muggles reaction to real magic" so I settled on just sticking with Audrey. It represents a challenge but I enjoy it and she will find out about his secrets soon, in a most terrible way, actually. Mwhahahaha.
Ugh, you have no idea how I've been dying to read a bit more from you! To think that I've been in a near-coma from revising, crying and hating my computer, which never seems to act right for me, the prat. :D
Oooh, I'll be on Paradox as soon as I can, perhaps in a few seconds!
I'd like to look at DoF as well, but I'm hoping you get over your block soon so I can keep up with some of your other delicious work as well! I think the best thing to do is to take a short break from reading AND writing or listen to some soothing music. Or beat someone up until you have the inspiration you need, hahaha. Let's see.Albus and the gang are up next, then "A Force of Wills" and then, "Growth" so look out for those and check out my one-shot if you get a chance! I hope it tides you over!
Much love and thanks again for being so awesome!
Gabbie


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