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Review:SerpentineOffering says:
I thought this was a beautiful one-shot! There is a lot of emotion in this story which I thought you brought out wonderfully. I really enjoyed the thought of the Malfoy's being humbled by the war, for example allowing Arthur to help carry Bella out. I also thought that Arthur helping them out was a great touch, it brought a lot of character to the story. That right there shows what a war can do to some.

Your writing is beautiful as always! I really, really enjoyed this story. Great job, Academica!


Author's Response: Hey! I'm really fond of this one as well, since it was my first real one-shot. I really loved having the chance to explore Narcissa, as she's one of my favorite women in the Harry Potter series, largely because of her hidden inner strength. I'm glad you felt like this story brought a new light to the Malfoy family and that you liked how I used the battle's aftermath to show that life can surprise you.

Thanks so much for your kind review :)


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