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Review:water_lily43175 says:
I have this wonderful image of Snape with Umbridge-style decor in his office...

I still think Tobias is rushing into this too fast. I love that he acknowledged Annie was a "true Gryffindor". Coming from someone who dislikes the arrogance and rashness of Gryffs - mind you, he's rash himself, I guess it's more Tanith who criticises their gung-ho attitude and she can get away with that because she thinks things through better than he does - POINT IS I like that Tobias said that.

It says just how much Tobias cares for Tanith, that he'd be willing to see Cal made a prefect given what he thinks of him at the moment...

I think Dumbledore hit the nail on the head there, at the end. I think Tobias DOES want to help the war effort, but more than anything feels guilty that he couldn't save Annie, and wants to make up for that...

Author's Response: I should have just done that - Snape never redecorated, because Snape doesn't redecorate, and so he's stuck with Umbridge's decor.

Tobias is rushing things, yes, especially by his own standards. Because he's always been someone to carefully plan out his life - only now that plan's been thrown into disarray and he doesn't know how to rebuild it. I forgot in this chapter how much Snape and Dumbledore are blatantly projecting their own issues ALL OVER HIM, though!!

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