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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I was going through the stories and I stumbled across yours and it looked interesting. I've never read a Molly/Arthur story so I figured I would check it out...I'm glad that I did.

I really like this first chapter. I think that the story has started out well. Instead of starting their interaction on the Hogwarts Express, like most people do between their characters you started this in a very unique way. You chose to show Arthur getting sorted.

I liked how you also included Molly's brother and that he was a Prefect. I liked how Arthur is already showing an interest in Molly and being comfortable in her presence even though this is an introduction chapter.

It flows well, and the pace is well balanced with the description. I didn't see any confusing sentences or typos. I wasn't exactly sure of sum-what, but that would be my only criticism. It doesn't take anything away from the chapter at all. I thought it was well written even for being a short chapter.

I am looking forward to seeing what else happens. I will be adding this to my favorites. =)


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