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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I really enjoyed this chapter. I liked the way that Hermione started out as the normal OCD Hermione and needed to get everything done. Draco was the one who wanted to just relax and take his time. I love the interaction between him and Jack. I think it is a spot on portrail of how a child that young would react especially because they tend to have their favorite parent at times. In this case adult.

I was excited to see how their friendship blossomed. The way that they have that ability to acknowledge one another and their meanings without having to put it all out there was nice to see. It gave it a lot of depth. I also liked how Draco wants to do some good with the money that he has rather then be the selfish brat that we have always known. I love the change he is making.

I felt horrible for Hermione when she recieved that phone call from her mother. I could personally relate to Hermione quite a lot in this chapter and I think you touched on the sensitive topic of a person suffering a stroke and how it effects their family very well, emotionally and physically.

I am so excited to find out what happens next! Keep up the superb work!! =)

-SR17

Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: I'm sorry for whatever similar situation it is you found yourself to Hermione's situation here. I haven't had any personal family with a stroke but I've had to help a few people through times like that in my line of work.

Draco's trying to do good but he's still got some of that brattiness that we know of from his younger years. He really thinks that with enough money he can buy anything but I think he's starting to learn. I'm so excited that you're liking how everyone's developing!

Thanks so much for this!

xChar

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