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Review:silverunicorn says:
i have to say, this story is simply amazing! it's enough to keep a reader on their toes and has just enough emotion and feelings going on. to be honest, i was a little skeptical about reading this story to begin with but I'm really glad that I decided to read it :)
this story is pretty short compared to white flags (which I loved reading btw) yet it captivates the reader and i just love it in so many different ways. it had humour in it as well which I thought worked out since the scenes were written in such a serious and deadly background.
you portrayed the characters so well that I couldn't help but feel as though it was canon. how some people were selfish which is so true in our own world and how everlasting the friendship between James and Sirius is. how friendship like that should never be wasted. kingsley also had character and I felt as though I knew him much better after reading this.
so all in all, an amazingly touching story! let me know if you're planning on writing any more stories sequels and I'll make sure that I'll drop by for a read! xx

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad I beat your skepticism. :P
Haha, I had planned for it to be shorter - originally, I didn't think it would be much longer then 5000 words and then it just kept going! :P
Yay; it took me a while to get back into the characters' mind-frames again (and that was hard because they've aged, too), so I'm happy to hear you think they're in character. :)
Kingsley was interesting to write; I didn't have a lot to go from with him, but at the same time, there were a lot of little things I had to get right - I think I read 'Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix' twice to try to get to know his character. :P
Aww! Thank you so much! Keep an eye on my blog (the URL is on my author's page) for updates. :)
Thank you so much for the review!

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