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Review:luvinpadfoot says:
This story is really great! I love Molly's personality and the way she's an outcast in her own family. You've done a fantastic job at making her feelings seem real. Moth is a funny guy and I can't wait to see their relationship develop! I'm also very interested in what kind of things they'll be learning in this new school.

The only note I have is that sometimes you spend so much time in Molly's thoughts that it can occasionally be difficult to follow the action, but that doesn't happen too much. I really love this story and I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hello! :)
Thank you very much - I'm glad that Molly's personality is coming across and not just her awkward situations! Oh that relationship will develop - I'm having as much fun writing it as I hope you will reading it! xD

Hm, I completely see where you're coming from. That's been bothering me recently, especially with this chapter. Hopefully that'll improve by the next! :)

Thanks so much for reading and leaving a lovely review! Keira :)

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