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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
This was a hauntingly beautiful chapter. Your imagination is golden. I don't even know dorcas, but I'm sad she's gone. I bet she was a lovely character. She and Benjy make me smile. And her home/hospice center... I love the concept of Frank and Alice being there in spirit but not body. And the dementor's kiss victims. I can't figure out who the girl on the roof pushing up her glasses is, but it was all great.

The grotta sounds terrifying and dark and creepy and the sort of place where you're always looking over your shoulder. I loved the idea of the Gaurd and thought it was all very well executed. I feel sort of sorry for Orion though. The image of voldemort held in a tree with all his death eaters perched around it was so chilling.

Annnd at last the contestant.
Omg. Omg. omg.

I love the contestants. I love lots of them and hope none of my faves is snuffed out lnater. cough fredcolinnymphadorjamessnapecedriclily cough.

Author's Response: You are going to fry my brain with your compliments, I do hope you realize that. If my brain swells, I'm blaming you.

Ever since writing the hospice center, I've been wanting to go back and flesh it out a little more. I'm beginning to think that if I lived there, it would be somewhere I would like to work. I can see why Benjy, who sacrificed a lot of personal time to look after a bunch of heathens, would be attracted to someone like Dorcas, who sacrificed personal time to care for invalids. It really sucks that Dorcas had to go and enter the Devil's Duel. Sometimes short-term desires have long-term consequences.

The girl on the roof was Orla. :3

lol that's a lot of favorites! Peter and Vincent aren't getting any love, I see. Lulz. XD

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Melissa. YOU ARE THE WIND BENEATH MY WINGS~

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