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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Interesting! The banner was what caught my attention first and then I saw this was for the werewolf challenge. I find werewolves to be very interesting but they're hard to write the 'right' way, you know what I mean? A lot of people tend to describe them the exact way Lupin was.

I found this to be a really good chapter. It intrigued me but more than anything it kind of scared me. I felt like I was reading about one of those news stories where they always seem to mention this kid walking home in the dark, he was listening to his music so he couldn't hear anything and then the attack happened.

And that part you wrote: He was supposed to get supplies and go home.

That was really eerie to me because there was a case just a month back where this kid got shot and all he was doing was getting a soda and chips and then he was supposed to go home.

The word choice just really gave my bones a chill.

One thing:

Flooing home had not being an option because he'd gone to a Muggle friend's house.

^ 'being' should be 'been'

Author's Response: That sounds a little scary actually, seeing it like a news story. I didn't know about that case...

Thank you. I'm really glad you like this story, despite you getting kind of scared. I'll fix that mistake, thanks for pointing it out to me. :)

Sam.

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