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Review:charlottetrips says:
This was beautifully handled. I liked that it was primarily from Hannah's POV and the feelings she had of not really being part of the overall Hogwarts group but the small ties she did have. Her own self doubting and uncertainty as to her place and her mothering skills were a nice touch to really bring her to life for me.

You wrote the kids well too. Frankie totally is like any other little boy I know, always asking questions, especially the uncomfortable questions. He seems pretty bright too which was a nice touch.

The funeral was done very nicely. The pastor giving his own personal touch on it made it even more personal and I was able to connect to the moment more.


Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I couldn't have written it without your challenge's inspiration so thank you :)

I'm glad you liked how I wrote Frankie and how I handled the funeral and such a sensitive topic.

Thanks for reviewing :)


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