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Review:Elenia says:
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You have a really good start here, I hope you'll update this story soon!

I liked your OC very much. She seems like an interesting character and can't wait to learn more about her. Especially since you mentioned she always prefers to run away from tricky situations and yet she's sorted into Gryffindor.

James is a jerk d: he really needs to deflate his head and treat the girls a lot better!

I liked your writing, grammar was fluent and the whole chapter flowed. I did wish for it to be a bit longer, but that's just me, I prefer longer chapters.

I can't believe Filch used the shackles! He should be fired! I guess his old age is taking the best of him already if that's the only way he thinks that's the only way he can keep them in control.

Anyways, lovely chapter. I really enjoyed reading this.

I hope you continue this (:

~Elenia

Author's Response: Hi fellow Gryffie! =)

I will definitely continue this story soon. I just have too many story ideas going on at the moment and I tend to get easily distracted.

Emmy has her quirks, but there's a reason for it all. You just have to wait and see. ;)

I can promise that next chapters are much longer than this first one. You actually inspired me to take a hard look of the stuff I have written for the next 3 chapters and after I get a certain blonde surfer boy from my upcoming summer story out of my head, I'll return to this and fix it for queue. Pinkie promise.

Thanks for the review. =)

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