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Review:charlottetrips says:
I like that you're taking on Lucius' POV for this. It's not often that someone really gets into Lucius' head and does it well. I really like the angle you've taken, where he's been brought low but hasn't yet been brought down enough to fully let go of his old self and his pride.

There was a couple times when you went present tense though this is primarily told in past tense. The spelling and grammar were otherwise fine. Characterization so far seems pretty solid.

I do wonder where you are going to take the rest of this story. Will we see Lucius transform?

Author's Response: This was very new for me when I wrote this. This was how I saw him after everything and I kinda just went with it. :P

I will fix those. :)

Thank you.

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