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Review:CambAngst says:
This was really, really lovely. The way that you switch back and forth and intertwine their two points of view, gradually converging into the moment of their reunion, was a really effective technique. Ron and Hermione are among my favorite ships, as well. Getting to read something as nice as this somehow makes all the Dramiones I have to wade through worthwhile.

Your writing was flawless. You did a great job of managing the transitions between the two points of view and you had a great balance of exposition and narrative.

Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me your opinions on this story! I think, of all the ones on my page, this might be one of my favorite one-shots I've yet written. :3 Always good to hear from a fellow Ron/Hermione shipper!

I'm glad you liked the style, too! I find it increasingly easier to write in second person, and it's actually one of my favorites, now. ;) Thank you for taking the time to leave me this -- it really made my day! Hope to see you back soon! ♥

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