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Review:potterfan310 says:
How is that this has been updated 2 months and i haven't even noticed, how i didn't notice i will never know
summer is soo adorable,i love her
i think the fact that each chapter is in a different POV makes the story even more interesting as we not only see/read what ade feels and does but what her best friends do as well :)
James' chapter 4 made me laugh, him and his blunt ness when lily is sat on ade+sirius' bed and his line 'hello broken heart, you haven’t been around for ages. How’ve you been? Oh yeah, whole.' made me smile
I love him and sirius when their drunk,making all the noise and acting like complete fool's and when james was 'then I lose my favourite companion - my foot' he's more concerned about his foot than losing sirius - Lol :)
i love Sirius in (the whole story) chapter 12 when he's bathing summer, he is a great dad and i love it when him and ade are talking and she mentions summer being half a marauder and about sirius not getting her into detention and his though 'Yes I don’t want Summer in detention by the time she’s two, but that would be the biggest achievement ever.'
They are so good together,please can they get it on already
and James,i love James not too mention the fact when he say's 'THEY NEED TO STRIP NAKED IN FRONT OF THE SCHOOL TO MAKE THEM BE TOGETHER AGAIN!', typical boy but maybe he and remus/lily should come up with a plan to make this happen, now that would be funny (even if a little mean to the wonderful Ade)
yay yay squel for joy, he asked her out and their going on a date whoo hoo =)
no!!!, second to last chapter are you trying to kill me
i love this story and how it starts with ade and summer being 10 months instead of when ade is pregnant with her, i love how sirius takes to be a dad real quick,like it was always meant to be, i love summer and her cuteness, i love james and lily, I love Ade and her charcter and most of all i love ade and sirius together (with a bit of summer thrown in) their perfect for each =)
I Really don't want this story to end but i'm glad ade and sirius are slowly getting there
10/10
-potterfan310
p.s is the last chapter an epilougue
p.p.s will there be a sequel

Author's Response: omg this actually litterally made my week!! thank you so much for this lovely review! i have to say my favourite person to write is James, he's just so silly but serious and you can tell how much he loves Lily! and thank you so much!! er the last chapter is sort of a chapter but sort of an epilougue, like a mixture of the two! and im sorry but the way i've ended it i dont think a sequel is possible! thank you for this though!!

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