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Review:Calypso says:
Aw!! You are so good at capturing emotions, especially the kind of dark, grief-y ones here! I really liked how closely you went into Ginny's feelings and all her perceptions of everything around her. I loved the beginning passage in particular, with the list of all the black things; it really set the tone and got us into her mindset and it was a great way of introducing the rest of the story.
There were a couple of places where you flickered into the past tense whilst Ginny was giving the eulogy which you might want to have a little look at and I would have loved to have heard more from Ron, Hermione and all the others who were there and close to Harry, but all in all I thought you managed to put the sentiments of the story over to the reader extremely well :)
- Calypso

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! This really means a lot to me. And thanks for pointing out the mistakes with the tenses, I'll have a look at that soon.
The reason I didn't write more on Ron, Hermione and all the others was because this was really a story about Ginny's loss and I know they all cared so much about Harry but Ginny was his wife and I wrote it so she wasn't very aware of anything around her apart from her pain, greif and love so to have their feelings would just make it a bit messy, if that makes sense. Anyway thanks again and feel free to check out my other stories! :)

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